my world
10:14 AM | Author: rohit
I live in my own world,
which is small and simple.
Far away from the reality,
here I am the only symbol.

I follow my own steps,
and look for those which are gone.
I cry when I die,
and laugh when I am born.

No one is here to hurt me,
except myself sometimes.
I run towards the end,
whenever my heart/soul cries.

When lost in dark deep somewhere,
I show myself the tiny ray.
To beat the better, to achieve the best,
I kill myself everyday.

Think that I run,
those outside.
But I know it's a battlefield,
not a place to hide.

I live in my own world,
which gives back the life to me.
but it's just like the real one.
here I am my own friend and I am my enemy.
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8 comments:

On July 27, 2009 at 5:46 AM , Anonymous said...

hey rohit.... this is such awonderful surprise.....u write so well... these poems are so magnificient......they r a reflection of ur inner self.... if someone hs to knw u... these reflections wld suffice.....m so proud of u....plzzz never stop writing,...u r gifted

 
On July 27, 2009 at 9:34 AM , sucheta chauhan said...

well... by my reckoning......

living in your own world.
didn't understand....
that anything can happen.....
when you take a chance....
you never believed in what you couldn't see.
you never open your heart
to all the possibilities.
oh you know that something has changed...??
never felt this way
and right here tonight.
this could be the.......

 
On July 28, 2009 at 4:45 AM , Anonymous said...

u r getting improved day by day...!!! one simple word...
superb..!!!

 
On July 28, 2009 at 11:18 AM , rohit said...

aeeee mummy... thank you... its really a very encouraging comment... :-)

 
On July 28, 2009 at 11:19 AM , rohit said...

thanks bhai... :-)

 
On July 28, 2009 at 11:20 AM , rohit said...

sucheta..... nice lines.... bura mat manna... but i couldnt completely understand yaar hehe...

 
On August 1, 2009 at 12:33 PM , Abhishek Vyas said...

Good one but i feel that the motive is not coming out strongly... :-))

I know you life in your own world
I know when you are born you laughed
I know no one to compete here with you
But still
someday you need to find someone
someday you need to break this shackles
someday you need to welcome people
someday you need to make friends and enemy
someday you need to think beyond yourself
Close your eyes and feel the difference
You have two ways
Choice is yours..

 
On August 2, 2009 at 2:44 PM , rohit said...

kya baat hai... :-) bohot achhe...

aage se jara jordaar koshish karunga... thanks...